Koi, I hope you don't get mad at me, but I find it hard to comment on your things <:3 I say the same things every time, I guess I'm just a terrible critic xD AS ALWAYS; fantastic work. I was a little confused during the whole thing, but that's nothing to worry about. I've always wanted to write a Harry Potter fanfic. . . but I dno't think I could <:3 It would end up being Draco-centric anyway. Hehehe. Love love love - Shan-Chan.