^^; I actually never thought of how that last line could be used to represent Sasuke's birth I forgot he was born in July too ... but it fits really well in that context as well! When I wrote this, I had - still have, actually - very vague ideas of what might be a series of one-shots based around an AU verse where Madara pays attention to Itachi (and eventually Sasuke, as we all know ...) from very early on, so that last sentence was originally meant to imply just something in the future with the colours - the clouds absorbing light and the watery dim grey-white they regurgitate - foreshadowing darker occurrences to come ...
It's fine, it's really fine, I'm just glad you like it! I actually just ... sort-of sit in front of my laptop with Word open and start typing. ^_^;;;;; I have no clue how it works, but if I'm in the right sort of mind-set (which I frankly don't know how to determine) I just ... end up with something written out.
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Date: 2010-07-07 02:13 am (UTC)I forgot he was born in July too... but it fits really well in that context as well! When I wrote this, I had - still have, actually - very vague ideas of what might be a series of one-shots based around an AU verse where Madara pays attention to Itachi (and eventually Sasuke, as we all know ...) from very early on, so that last sentence was originally meant to imply just something in the future with the colours - the clouds absorbing light and the watery dim grey-white they regurgitate - foreshadowing darker occurrences to come ...It's fine, it's really fine, I'm just glad you like it! I actually just ... sort-of sit in front of my laptop with Word open and start typing. ^_^;;;;; I have no clue how it works, but if I'm in the right sort of mind-set (which I frankly don't know how to determine) I just ... end up with something written out.